Collage In Progress for Critique
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woww! This looks amazing, I really like the layering of the paper on the plate and I also love the different colors involved. I think the small paper strips going around the edge are nice, and I like how the paper was cut out with words on it. Very creative and pleasing to the eye.
I like how bright and vibrant the colors are.
I wish you would have filled out more of the plate.
What if you added more outlines/details to make the collage look fuller/busier?
I like the layering of the paper in the middle for the flower and the different patterns on the petals. I wish there were other details added like some drawings. What if you continued to layer paper?
I like the idea of doing a flower by layering paper. I wish it was more symmetrical (although this is a bit of a nitpick) and that some papers didn’t have text on them. What if there was a flower petal pattern on the very edge of the bowl?